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He’d been telling stories about his grandson, Michael Vick, stories about how a poor kid from a rough neighborhood in Newport News, VA could use football to build a fancy hours for his mother and life of fame and riches for himself. Stories of taking a train to New York to be with his grandson when the Atlanta Falcons made Vick, a quarterback from VA Tech with a powerful left arm and magical legs, the top pick in the NFL draft in 2001.
Boddie returned with a frame containing . . .”
So begins the attention-grabbing first paragraph written by Mark Maske in an article entitled Playing to Wrong Crowd for the 8-21-07 Washington Post.
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There have probably been hundreds of articles written about Michael Vick in newspapers around the country in the past few weeks.
I bet that is the ONLY ONE that starts out that way. The reporter was not content to be common. I imagine he thought, “How can I start this article in an unexpected way? How can I grab my audience from the get-go? How can I paint a word picture so readers see what I’m saying? How can I quote someone talking so people feel like they’re a fly-on-the-wall ?”
From now on, don’t start your article, blog, book, or column with what you think.
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What are your tips for grabbing readers? Have you written an article or blog post that starts off with an intriguing first paragraph? Send us a sample (100 words max) that POP!s . . . and I’ll send the first three submissions my Write Here – Write Now calendar with 365 inspiring quotes about how you can jump-start your creativity.
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Thanks for all your responses. It’s always nice to know people are reading my blog and finding it interesting and useful.
I posted a tip today from my “I Can’t Believe I Wrote the Whole Thing” CD about how to overcome writers’ block. Hope that helps kick-start your creativity again and the words flow so fast your fingers can hardly keep up.
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