We’ve been working on his book and he said, “You’re my muse. You always encourage me to go a sentence deeper.”
What he meant by that is that we often gloss over an idea or experience.
When we stay on the surface, people read or hear what we said and move on.
That means it had no enduring impact.
If we want an idea or experience to truly reach our listeners/readers and resonate with them on a visceral/emotional level, we must “go a sentence deeper.”
How did you FEEL about what happened?
What did you SAY to yourself or others when this happened?
What were the exact words of what they said in response?
How did that impact you, exactly?
Put us there in the scene so we see and feel it right along with you.
Now you are creating interactive communication about the human experience that transcends the page and stage.
What you have written or said just made time and distance a non-issue because we are experiencing what you experienced as if we were “there.”
What are you writing right now? What presentation are you preparing? Go back over it. Did you stay on the surface?
If so, go back and go a sentence deeper.
Everyone will benefit – including you.